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Pastel Eye by =Holly6669666:iconHolly6669666:

Categories Traditional Art > Drawings > Miscellaneous

©2009 =Holly6669666
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My second attempt at using pastels, this time to do something a bit more detailed than a flower, so I chose to do an eye.

This is a photo of it, I don't know if it would have turned out better if I had scanned it or not, but its just a small drawing anyway.

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~truesunn Jun 24, 2009, 1:58:23 AM
I would use a kneaded eraser to clean up the white of the eye. I would also erase out a small reflected spot on the iris to make it appear more realistic. The eyelashes are a tad full, but the direction and varied lengths are great! You could draw some radient lines coming from the pupil to the edge of the iris to add a little more depth to them, too. You know what they say, practice makes perfect. Overall, it's a good second attempt! Keep at it, I can't wait to see what you can do in a couple of months :)
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~MeganTheDarkOverlord Jul 6, 2009, 8:38:56 AM
good job on the iris. keep at it man
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=Holly6669666 Jul 6, 2009, 8:48:06 AM
thank you :)

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June 23
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Canon
Canon PowerShot SD400
1/30 second
F/2.8
6 mm
Dec 18, 2008, 4:41:39 AM

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