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Lips Drawing Practice by =Holly6669666:iconHolly6669666:

Categories Traditional Art > Drawings > Miscellaneous

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Lips that I drew in my sketchbook for my drawing class at school. Done in pencil.

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=LordAlmighty Apr 6, 2009, 8:20:52 AM
This image has 3 different drawings, So I'll crit each drawing separately ^^;
So I'll start with the best - the right one above - the smiling lips. It came out beautifully, the shading is well done, but you can use more shadows on the teeth - then it will be great.
The right one below - I think there is something wrong with the proportion of the upper lip - it's too long in my opinion.
And the last one - shadows is a little bit darker than it needs to be - try use more light gray levels for the skin and than the lips will come out more. :aww:

Good luck! :)
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~0urangeApple Feb 28, 2009, 10:51:24 AM
cool! the proportions were really done well! :3
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=madbaumer37 Feb 28, 2009, 1:09:11 PM
looks great, holly. :)
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=Holly6669666 Feb 28, 2009, 2:26:01 PM
thanks :)

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=Holly6669666 Feb 28, 2009, 2:26:10 PM
:) thanks Jeremy

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~lonleystar Feb 28, 2009, 2:59:48 PM
wow these are excellent

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Time doesn't travel in lines, it goes in circles, thats why clocks are round.- Caboose, Red Vs Blue Machinima.

Bury my fucking body dammit!
Ok, ok fine. Hey Church look, birds. Why are they flying in a circle?
-Red Vs Blue Machinima
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=Holly6669666 Feb 28, 2009, 3:00:04 PM
thank you :)

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~lonleystar Feb 28, 2009, 3:05:42 PM
no problem!

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Time doesn't travel in lines, it goes in circles, thats why clocks are round.- Caboose, Red Vs Blue Machinima.

Bury my fucking body dammit!
Ok, ok fine. Hey Church look, birds. Why are they flying in a circle?
-Red Vs Blue Machinima
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~0urangeApple Mar 1, 2009, 4:08:23 AM
;) youre weelcome! :D
hey how come I dont see u on msn anymoar..? :(
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Every generation has to face the same old questions as if they were altogether new.
We endure because we have to endure. That is the way by which strength comes when we most need it.
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*Stroody Mar 1, 2009, 7:33:55 AM
Excellent !

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Don`t mind me .. Just here to admire & comment on members work. My drawing qualities are poor so don`t expect anything from me in this category lol. One thing I do know though , I appreciate good work and I know what I like.
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